There was a day when i was 6 or 7 years old .And at that age getting lost means history .I will just express that time to you . It was a beautiful Monday morning when i woke up . This time i might have been atleast 6 or 7 years of age . My dad woke up and said that we were going to some mall in Sharjah,U.A.E known as "Mega Mall" . At that age going to a mall meant like going to India ! I was over excited and rushed to brush my teeth and bathe . After I got ready my mom and dad were suprised because i usually take a long time to get up and bathe .
We went with our uncles car .But it took some time to reach there . When we reached i looked around it was so big compared to my size . But I had got lost when i was admired by a cycle . That was the time i got lost . My parents thought that i was with them . I never knew what to do .I felt sad and cried .Then by luck one police guard came and told me why was i crying .I told him that i was lost . Then he took me to the counter and announced my name and my parents name . My parent were in the book section and soon as they heard it they came rushing to me and wiped my tears of . And they forgot all about shopping and they just went home . This was perhaps the worst day of my life . But recalling it i realized how i must have felt that day .
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ReplyDeleteWell just to tell u...I did this when I was only 9 yrs old...I think writing at this level at such a small age is appreciatable....if you do browse on QUORA...U CAN SEE MY RECENT BLOGS
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ReplyDeleteit was quite a nice passage but i would urge you to recheck your work after completing it because i found some errors here like the police man must have came and ASKED you the reason why were you crying but not told you
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ReplyDeleteI could have written a better essay. The punctuation is bad. I am only 6 years old and I know more than you!
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